tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2819338062461909908.post1847163118268646609..comments2023-12-05T15:15:38.013+02:00Comments on Achieving Proficiency: The negative and positives effects that parents may have on their children when they try to push them in a certain direction.Michael Kapsalishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13799776796087270186noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2819338062461909908.post-7897787214018585162013-03-24T14:07:29.671+02:002013-03-24T14:07:29.671+02:00Great attempt, Michael! Try to be careful with som...Great attempt, Michael! Try to be careful with some vocabulary you use and the formation of rhetorical questions, too. This essay would pass, but I am sure you can do a lot better. :-)Christina Markoulakihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06460428861771429571noreply@blogger.com