It is said that hunger and poverty are two definitions which are interrelated .Unfortunately ,this is true and something has to be done in order to limit their rates.Especially in underdeveloped countries where people have insufficient amounts of crops and as a consequence lots of people die and suffer from illnesses such as malnutrition, iron deficiency,mineral deficiency as their immune system is damaged and they are susceptible to illnesses and their growth is stunted. GM crops are said to be a solution to tackle the world hunger that torments underdeveloped countries but we are not assured that are healthy for the human organism.Lands could be given to people who will be willing to cultivate them and as an implication of this, it will be beneficial as it will tackle the insufficiency of crops .As I see it, we should take action before it becomes widely offensive for the whole planet .It's our duty to keep this planet alive and all of us should keep in our minds that we would not like to hand down to the next generation a planet full of misery and poverty
*that THEY are healthy for the human organism -> don't forget the subject of the clause!ReplyDelete
**we would not like to hand down to the next generation a planet full of misery and poverty --->
we would not like to hand down a planet full of misery and poverty to the next generation
Overall George, that is a splendid paragraph! New words and great grammar manifest themselves, which makes me think that you deserve one extra goal!